When I decided to settle on ns3, for the reasons outlined above, it was imperative to work out how much code existed in ns3, and how much I would need to write.
-ns3 ships a CSMA implementation, without collision detection, along with a network bridge implementation, which doesn't conform to the standard \ref{80211d}. In particular it lacked a RSTP implementation.
+ns3 ships a CSMA implementation, without collision detection, along with a network bridge implementation, which doesn't conform to the standard \ref{80211d}. In particular it lacked a RSTP - Rapid Spanning Tree Protocol - implementation.
-As outlined in 1.4, MOOSE, the 802.11D specification, along with Ethernet implementation details are entirely off the course which I had to research
+As outlined in 1.4, MOOSE, the 802.11D specification, along with Ethernet implementation details, are entirely off the course which I had to research
\section{Changes to Proposal}